I am going to be frank, and I apologise in advance, but this is not going to get you many marks. I don't know if you rushed it or need a bit of help with it but it does not meet the standards for the high marks at A2 (sorry!!)
The layout is all wrong and it is far too dark. The text does not look professional and the tagline is a bit long.
We are aiming for the high marks so I am going to push you towards them - shall we sit and create something together?
Sorry to be blunt but 'A's don't come easy! EllieB
Nancy,
ReplyDeleteI am going to be frank, and I apologise in advance, but this is not going to get you many marks. I don't know if you rushed it or need a bit of help with it but it does not meet the standards for the high marks at A2 (sorry!!)
The layout is all wrong and it is far too dark. The text does not look professional and the tagline is a bit long.
We are aiming for the high marks so I am going to push you towards them - shall we sit and create something together?
Sorry to be blunt but 'A's don't come easy!
EllieB